I added drama lines to make it more story oriented. This is the final version before I split up to make it fit on screen with my framework. Let me know if this helps it feel more “adventure” oriented.
Update about 6PM Mountain Time USA:
I’m trying to figure out how many lines of text I can get on one screen. Since my framework only uses images, I decided to make a sort of mockup for one of the screens. I don’t really like the way it looks though. The gray square represents where the art work is going. I don’t have anything to tell the text to stay up on screen a certain time, so basically the image will be overlayed with text every page until you hit a button. I’m still trying to figure some things out. Also I’m trying to find a font that looks like the numbers in the original Atari Pong machine. Let me know if you can suggest other layouts.
